Honestly your game is really funny, I have high hopes for this, you put way more effort into this than I expected for a yuri game. Could've easily teamed up with a artist and made some yuri action then called it a day but you did more! Nice job! It's something I legit would pay money for on steam. It deserves it anyways.
Also I think for humor sake you should keep the bosses dialogue very barren, it was funny what you wrote for the first one.